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Desiring gardenia's scent Planting two, praying for blooms In the quiet, surrounded By pollen, ahchoo

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2024 2:51:00 PM

Fun one, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/22/2024 4:59:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 4/20/2024 9:38:00 PM

The pollen of some flowers cause allergies. For some, it is mild, for others it is so severe causing severe bouts of sneezing and breathlessness. So well written, dear Sara with an apt image.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/21/2024 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 4/15/2024 4:47:00 PM

So true, Sara, gardenias, do make me ahchoo! Well written Dodoitsu poem, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/16/2024 8:09:00 AM

I enjoy their fragrance though, Bil. Thanks for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/15/2024 8:35:00 AM

Still suffering from allergies?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2024 12:55:00 PM

Not as bad this year as some years, Victor. The people buying property around us are cutting a lot of the trees down which has helped the allergy problems but not the environment. Thanks for dropping by. I don't have it as bad as my grandsons. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/13/2024 2:58:00 PM

You have written a beautiful poem, Sara. I really hope that you don't end up getting the illness and that pollen doesn't have such a negative impact on you.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 4:46:00 PM

Your visit is uplifting, Lasaad. I am hoping up well with the help of allergy medicine which is a daily thing for me. Thank you for the nice review of my work and concern. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 4/13/2024 2:03:00 PM

I hope you dont get the flu, and pollen doesnt get to you so badly. Beautiful dodoitsu so well woven and delivered! I love the picture that goes with it too. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 4:45:00 PM

IE, I am hoping flu season is over now. I did have an injection of flu vaccine to help keep me from getting it. Allergies are there to bother me all year but worse in the spring and fall. Thanks for the visit and nice review and concern. Sara K

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/13/2024 6:41:00 AM

I love gardenia, so I would gladly sneeze a time or two for that fragrance. Lovely poem, dear. Thanks for the visit.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 1:31:00 PM

Yes, a lovely fragrance, Eileen. I had an aunt that said in winter she did not need any perfume and in summer she pinned on a gardenia. I appreciate the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/13/2024 5:53:00 AM

Allergies are rife as Spring produces magnificent blooms with delicate perfumes like the gardenia.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 1:30:00 PM

Yes, Victor, spring and fall are really bad for me but not as bad as it is for some people. In the fall, ragweed is really abundant here and causes problems as well. The fatigue that is brought about by allergies is so debilitating. Thanks for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/13/2024 5:24:00 AM

What a cool beauty you have painted in these beautiful four lines dear friend Sara. One can feel the love and warmth with which have planted these Gardenia plants and even praying for them. In India still lot of Indians worship plants and we treat them as our best friends. Even some plants like Holy Basil is worshiped like a family protector. Great write dear friend..Love & best wishes...Ravindra

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 1:28:00 PM

Ravindra, plants are important to us in that they are part of our diet as well as part of the diet of our animal kingdom plus the beautiful birds. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. I appreciate the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Sara K

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/13/2024 4:16:00 AM

Very cute, Sara:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, Joanna. I like the smiley face. Your visit has been encouraging. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/12/2024 5:21:00 PM

they make me sneeze also, Sara K as does lantana. I love the scent of both. Nicely done & have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2024 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Sara B. I haven't noticed that lantana affects me, but the scent on it is not as strong. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K