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Ah Margarita

Dark waterfall of soft strands Playing in the air, loftily.... Dark hollows piercing my heart White shine-brighter than the sun... Caricature of the milkiest dye Rosiest ambrosias, sweet nor'westers.... Angelic face, love supreme Eve's grace and a hue in cream... Floating enigma of delight Captivating perfume of silky nethers.... Encumbering all other damsels Fairest pearl of the night sky Outshining the heavens who sculpted her That is Margarita................ A soul without words A despair without losses A bride without the pain A momentary ray of hope The sunshine of the day A melody of mystical times Margarita is that............. Masterpiece of my brush Reflection of my demeanour Melody of my seasons That is Margarita...........

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Date: 7/29/2012 5:28:00 PM
Samantak, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I enjoyed your heartfelt expression of color and beauty! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Samantak. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carol! :)
Date: 7/26/2012 6:51:00 PM
A lovely, descriptive write, Samantak! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim! :)
Date: 7/26/2012 2:45:00 PM
You make me want to know..who is Margarita? [the moon?] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:28:00 PM
I tried to bring in different interpretations through the description, one of them being the Moon. :) My primary motivation for wanting to write such a poem was a lady whose beauty captivated me back in the day. :)
Date: 7/26/2012 4:42:00 AM
Samantak congrats on your win, vibrantly written..David
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much David! :)
Date: 7/26/2012 3:18:00 AM
Beautiful write, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Mandy!! :)
Date: 7/20/2012 11:50:00 AM
splendid writing. Congrats on your worthy win.
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! :)
Date: 7/16/2012 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your super well deserved win in Craig's "Sweet" contest Samantak. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Carol! :)
Date: 7/15/2012 7:42:00 PM
Awesome descriptive write....congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Cecilia! :)
Date: 7/15/2012 5:25:00 PM
Daruun!!!Congrats!!
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/16/2012 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Kash :)
Date: 7/15/2012 1:41:00 PM
congratulations on your winning poem.
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/15/2012 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Joann!! :)
Date: 7/15/2012 1:12:00 PM
Samantak, congrats on your great win, David
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Samantak Bhadra
Date: 7/15/2012 2:12:00 PM
Thanks David :)

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