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stretched taut against a golden sun whipped by a salty breeze white sheets entice sea-fragrant skies earth's pungent scent seize weary skin and bone . . . sinews worn surrender to the fine cotton softness perfumed by clouds heaven and earth entwine Faye Lanham Gibson © March 26, 2015

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/26/2015 9:14:00 PM

What David said this is excellent, A Fav for me!

Faye Gibson
Date: 3/27/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks, Maurice. I appreciated the visit and comments. I am getting back in the grove slowly after a long break for moving and getting settled in a new home.

David Mohn

Date: 3/26/2015 8:44:00 PM

This is exquisite Faye...beautifully written

Faye Gibson
Date: 3/27/2015 7:55:00 AM

Thank you, David. I have been away for several months, getting moved and settled in our new Florida home. Hoping to be present here more often now. I appreciate your reading my poem and your encouraging comments.