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Agony of Da Feets

cowboy threw me out then left on my horse with her shots heard near boot hill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/11/2011 4:08:00 PM
Enjoyed this well written haiku, Judy! Thank you also for stopping by and commenting "A little girl with a plastic bag"...Have a great week...Gert:)
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:20:00 PM
hahaha, great haiku twist! NICe one.
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Date: 4/10/2011 12:58:00 PM
Very witty, Judy. When I saw the title, I was thinking about all the foot ailments I have. "Agony of Da Feets" could be the title of my biography. LOL Thanks for your lovely Soup mail. Have a terrific day! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:38:00 AM
Wow Judy these words are too cool luv.. great visual and luv that wonderful title too..
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Date: 4/9/2011 9:46:00 PM
a very creative piece you wrote here, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 4/9/2011 5:33:00 PM
I agree what Don has to say
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Date: 4/9/2011 5:20:00 PM
If your horse(lover) runs off n leaves ya if it wont come back thats' right just hit it over the ass with the bridle till it runs right out of sight cos ya bound 2 catch a new one if ya cast the rope just right to saddle up n mount and ride all through the starry night comment thanks ...Don
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