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Agony Aunt Competition Entry

Dear depressed girlfriend you say he’s acting strange And I understand you life feels so rearranged However this boy really is not a man He had his sister finish the dastardly plan So my loving advice to you my dear Is to hold your head high and walk away with no fear For this three-month fling with a boy From what you say made you feel like a toy I know right now the pain is torture and you’re in agony But one day you will find a man to go down on one knee A man that wont play games with your tender heart But will treat you right from the very start So my advice to you my lovely girl Is to get dressed up and give a swirl You have a gorgeous soul this is true So time to pick yourself up and start a new

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Date: 3/5/2014 7:43:00 PM
Great poem with good advice. xx fab
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Date: 3/2/2014 12:25:00 PM
wow Quin fabulous write! Do check out my page too. See you in chat Jan xxxxx
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:01:00 AM
Quinlan good advice and excellent writing....David
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Date: 2/20/2014 11:33:00 AM
I like the advice and I hope she takes it. I always say if somebody don't want to play with you - pick up your toys and leave. Good poem thanks for sharing... lucilla
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