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Aging Love

Enthralled I am with such delight, your hand embraced in mine a kiss we share by fire light how devilish and divine. Embarking on a future set, the stones all well and laid a heart with our names finely etched of every plan we ever made. Could not this night bring a tear, as I watched you fall asleep knowing love is growing here rich and ever deep. Today I coined a wishing well, though our wishes have come true a heart of stories yet to tell with memories of us two. As we age and toil away, there's no place i'd rather be wrapped up and here to stay with your arms embracing me. Nov 5,2018

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Date: 9/12/2019 11:54:00 PM
This poem captured me so much that read it more than twice. So well written.
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Date: 10/29/2019 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Edmund, I am glad you found this poem something good enough to read more then once. I very much appreciate it. Take care Jess
Date: 3/2/2019 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful possibilities, great poem, Jessica...jimbo
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Date: 3/17/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words. Jess :)
Date: 11/6/2018 7:54:00 AM
This was beautiful Jess. Soft and heart touching. This is how love should be. I loved the wishing well line, dropped in a coin though our wishes have already come true, there are more wishes and dreams to come.
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Date: 11/6/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank You Chris for you warm words. Glad this piece appealed to you. Why not wish for more wonderful things to happen, it can be a nice thing. Hugs, Jess

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