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Below is the poem entitled Aging which was written by poet Julie Alcin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Innocent angel sent from God
I am feeble and somewhat odd
I play and eat, I cry and sleep
As you pray God my soul to keep

The older I get the more I learn
The more I get to crash and burn
The more I smile because of my friends
And wish my teen life doesn’t end

But now I’m weak as a child again
My health becomes difficult to maintain
And now I slowly lose my breath
My last day; a touch from death

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Very god poem on Aging.Enjoyed the read.

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
    poet Avatar kash poet
    Date: 3/29/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    GOOD poem......