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Aged To Perfection

Now I lay me down to sleep in the arms of a woman who lets me keep the legend of me, in my mind. My old woman is terribly kind. Now I lay me down to sleep in the arms of a man who lets me keep my girlish reflection — his eyes a mirror. My old man could not be dearer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/16/2017 9:09:00 AM
Big silly grin sitting on my face. Mature love is the best, and much more fun. What a lovely sentiment contained in your poem.
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Date: 8/23/2017 9:20:00 AM
Silly grins are great!
Date: 7/20/2017 9:10:00 AM
Hi John, You had me at the title alone. But I must say I agree with Daniel, this is "sweet". It shows two people that are in love:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/20/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thanks Alexis!
Date: 7/19/2017 10:43:00 AM
This is, dare I say, "sweet" John. That's love my friend:)
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Date: 7/20/2017 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Daniel. I've witnessed this in some couples.

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