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what tales lie behind wrinkled eyes sagging corners tired with life what dance has the crooked back danced angled with experience blissful and dark many leathered hands stroked hair wiry gray aged by this journey scratchy laughter remains of this wrinkled tangible existence yet the infinite spirit imprints burden of proof in the shiny new succession of childrens giggles

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Date: 11/24/2013 11:40:00 AM
Blythe... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:36:00 AM
Blythe, Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/19/2013 7:24:00 AM
Very good...
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Date: 11/19/2013 1:58:00 AM
I like your economical use of words The poem is pared to the bone and you cram a lot of insight into this terse poem Love the last two lines
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