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Against The Wind

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. It's Not Flying a Kite season Su n shi ne north breeze Bundle up Hand freeze Run against the wind Kite slowly takes upward flight I'm worn out will rest tonight I think I may try once again Maybe when its warm in the spring maybe March or April May June July Anytime But when Its So Very Cold | | | | | | | | | % | % *

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/22/2024 11:20:00 AM

Oh, what a splendid piece of verse! This remarkable creation, Sara. has left me in awe. I am particularly captivated by the unique structure of the kite-shaped poem, a truly ingenious choice. Congratulations on your contest win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad, for dropping by and taking time to comment and say congratulations. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 2/19/2024 4:29:00 AM

Well done dear Sara...! You are indeed an expert in Shape poems. You are right too. Winter is not the time to fly a kite. Summer, when it is breezy is the time for it. If this is for a contest, I am sure you'll be a winner! All the Best.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2024 6:25:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I don't think I entered it in a contest or at least I can't remember if I did. LOL..Bad memory like Biden. Sara K

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/14/2024 3:08:00 PM

Very impressive, Sara. Your shape poems show exceptional skill + grand content. Metaphorically, to fly a kite is to embrace soaring freedom. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 4:22:00 PM

Thank you, Brian, for the information about the meaning of using a kite as a metaphor. Well, I was talking about flying a kite in this cold weather when it is still to early even though the sun is out to fly a kite. LOL..Your visit was delightful. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2024 10:13:00 PM

As the song goes in Mary Poppins: go fly a kite. Difficult to make shapes but you did it well.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 9:27:00 AM

Yes, for some reason this one just doesn't want to stay where I put it. I guess I did something wrong at the set up so I will just leave it alone and try again sometime. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/13/2024 8:15:00 PM

Very nice, Sara. I'm with you. I told my kite to go fly itself --- until at least mid-April. lol.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 9:25:00 AM

Appreciate the visit and the humor. A remote kite what a wonderful idea. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

David Fisher

Date: 2/13/2024 4:45:00 PM

Cool shape, Sarah. Funny though, what if winter is great for making the kite soar? I'm not going to find out either.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 9:25:00 AM

I think that it would soar in some of this wind we have been having but if it were a paper kite it would melt away in all the rain. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/13/2024 4:20:00 PM

well done, Sara K. I liked your kite-shaped poem...you're right...February probably isn't the time to fly a kite :-) Have a great evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 9:24:00 AM

Yes, LOL..February isn't the right time to go fly a kite. I like the smiley face. Sara K

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/13/2024 12:44:00 PM

Cute one, well done x

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2024 1:11:00 PM

Thank you, Dilly Dally. I am still working on it. It may win this round. LOL..Sara K