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Again, Just a Dream

~ Lost in the silence where dreams now awaken, closing my eyes to the stress of the day Feeling alone and a little forsaken, wishful these moments that come into play Wondering if it is imagination, bringing these thoughts on this evening to me Something to quell all this anticipation, answers to questions my heart longs to see Now as I fall off my mind it is reeling, fading to gray now that slumber is due Shadows and shimmers the scene now revealing, fantasies breathe at the edge of the view There is a field filled with beautiful flowers, rainbows and butterflies scatter the air As if I have some incredible powers, here in this place that I'm longing to share Evergreen trees line a path I am strolling, squirrels and bluebirds at play looking on Daffodil whispers cross hills now are rolling, dewdrops like diamonds reflect on the lawn Then as I see it, your smile does glisten, warm like a summer breeze gently a'flow Singing a song filled with love as I listen, comfort becomes in the light of it's glow You take my hand and my troubles start leaving, soft as a feather this feeling of bliss It is right now that my world is believing, as you lean forward to give me a kiss It's then I notice the dawning sun rising, painting the sky as I open my eyes Morning has come, though it is not surprising, again just a dream, that I soon realize It is the same every night as I'm sleeping, almost those beautiful lips I might feel Only to be left alone steady weeping, finding each day is the only thing real So as I sit here my weary heart breaking, truth is my darkness however it seems Another day in these moments I'm taking, hoping again you appear in my dreams ~

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Date: 2/12/2020 3:23:00 PM
Again, just an epic...wonderful phrasing Chris. Excellent my friend. Ron
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Chris Green
Date: 2/12/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Ron. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 2/12/2020 1:58:00 PM
Oh, Chris, the dreams you have are so beautiful, almost like being in paradise with the woman you love. How sad that we have to awaken from dreams like this! There have been times I wished I could keep dreaming too. Beautifully penned, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 2/12/2020 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for all of the kindness you show me. I truly do appreciate your visits.
Date: 2/12/2020 9:40:00 AM
WoW!Chris, What a beautiful dream. Everything looks so amazing. And dream such as this can cause one to escape from the stress of life. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/12/2020 10:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis. I hope you have a wonderful day as well. Keep smiling. :)
Date: 2/12/2020 8:52:00 AM
Wow, this is a favorite for me. But this can be more than a dream and brought to be real too :) Your writing is beautiful Chris :)
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Date: 2/12/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 2/12/2020 6:19:00 AM
Emotive write! Love the line: Now as I fall off my mind it is reeling
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Date: 2/12/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much Kim.
Date: 2/11/2020 8:31:00 PM
Zippity-doo-dah, Chris! I thought that I was in Disney's 'Song of the South' with all that wonderful imagery there --- only to be crushed by reality in the end. Great write on the roller-coaster, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 2/12/2020 7:42:00 AM
You know, you have to be a certain height to ride this roller coaster. :) Thanks my friend, I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 2/11/2020 7:50:00 PM
Love the verse, Chris, a field of beauty in a dreams to stay in. Eve
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Date: 2/12/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve.
Date: 2/11/2020 7:14:00 PM
wow... to dream like that i'd probably want to stay asleep a bit longer too... you write so beautifully...I could only dream to write like this... exquisite Chris...
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Date: 2/12/2020 7:41:00 AM
Most days I want to stay in bed whether I am dreaming or not. :) Thank you my friend for your wonderful comment and the smile it has brought me this morning
Date: 2/11/2020 6:34:00 PM
i'd bet that everyone wishes they could dream like you do, chris! even if they could, no one could express it as amazingly as you are able to. it's a privilege to read your poems...
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Chris Green
Date: 2/12/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Ilene for your always kind words to me.

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