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Afternoon Sun

Shade casts a chilly blanket upon the afternoon wall As the sun takes refuge behind the midday clouds Letting not the warm fingers of sunlight’s rays Caress the weary travelers on their journey through life Oh, winter sun, peer your weary eyes from behind the clouds And allow us the pleasure of your warmth and light for guidance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/3/2009 10:05:00 PM
I am so ready for the sun to warm things up here in Kansas. Thank you for helping me to imagine it today as if it were here already. The thought alone seemed to warm me up. You write so vividly and my eyes though they are weary can picture the warm suns rays caressing the open fields of the plains. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/3/2009 8:53:00 PM
I,m ready for sunshine here in the valley good write
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:37:00 PM
So ready for some nice sunshine great write thank you for your comment,God Bless,Marie
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:10:00 AM
Yes yes....please peer your weary eyes from behind the clouds Mr. Sun....so tired of gloomy days! Love this, Michael! ~ Carrie
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