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Afternoon Poem

...afternoon breeze whistling
      eyes closed, closely listening
         leaves low breathing, heaving
            forest edge darkening
               ancient haze, mist creeping
                  thousands of years float by
                     ever-seeing mind's eye
                        virginal sea, verdant earth
                           deepest sky, heaven's worth
                              tales of leaving, poems of birth...

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  1. Date: 8/24/2008 4:36:00 AM
    Romeo - truly amazing and very relaxing poem - I loved the layout and the flow - great job - God bless

  1. Date: 8/22/2008 11:16:00 AM
    Romeo I love this write WOW WOW this is a favorite and then you topped it off with a great form here EXCELLENT WRITE!!! Laura :)