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Afternoon Delight

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Afternoon Delight

    Spring's slipping away

A May shower falls at noon

       The final rainbow

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 8:41:00 AM
    Hey Mitch, this is brilliant, harry

  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:41:00 PM
    I could just imagine that rainbow, all bright with a golden sunny background-- hmmm the term liquid sunshine day come sto mind right now, Mitch! You sure left such a sweet comment in my poem, thank you very much, from one amateur poet to another :D p.s. I love the word "amateur" since it takes its roots from the word for love I believe, to me an amateur will always be a person who does something because of the passion, the love for it. And that's how your poems come across for me.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:58:00 PM
    BTW - I'd marry you in a heartbeat, Mitch. You're such a sweetheart.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Long time no see, Mitch. Glad to catch this lovely haiku here. I love that final line; the final rainbow.

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 7:42:00 AM
    Here in Norway we have one day Spring... and then winter......wery good haiku Mitch! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 7:28:00 AM
    Here in the Sierras, Spring jumps into the heat of summer way too soon. We are already baking here. Hugs, Catie :)