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Aftermath

The first touch of night Marks the eastern horizon I've spent the whole day Trying not to remember The skill of your deception

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2011 11:20:00 AM
wow, this is really Cool, JIM!!!
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Date: 11/20/2011 7:48:00 PM
Oh ouch! Well done! Nicely written, making the right effect of emotion with a few words in this well written Tanka. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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