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Afterlife

I held the hand of Jesus last night, He woke me this morning and we looked outside. Scratchy records played protest songs from The 60’s, as hearses rolled by, filled with forgotten dreams….”you can burn that paper box, boy, but you still gotta show” I dropped out, then got drafted, I told him…when I came home, It wasn’t first class, you can’t breathe oxygen in a box, stacked with my mates in the bowels of the plane…. Now…… I like to pretend no one fights anymore, everyone sings songs of love, pleasing to the old trees, swaying in peace….. Sunshine streamed upon this page just now! just this moment! ........my pen shadows to the right of this word….I’m lighter now, brighter, ……..brighter 03/18/11 6:49 pm © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/18/2011 4:58:00 AM
i'm just so into this, james! love the form, the format, essence, the engaging lines about the afterworld.. did i forget anything else?? wow.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/9/2011 5:32:00 AM
Wow, I really loved this, James! Going to fav it! I really liked the first two lines. Amazing job! Emilia
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:26:00 AM
What a great poem. I really liked this one.
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Date: 3/31/2011 9:26:00 AM
such a lovely piece of poetry and all so true, God bless you for writing it.
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:02:00 PM
sad what it takes to show us WHEN we are in the light...and we don't accknowledge it and we don't see it and it's shining in our faces? Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2011 5:22:00 PM
Ohh well this is just wonderful:)
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Date: 3/18/2011 5:22:00 PM
I LOVE IT JUMBO, EXCEPT LAST NIGHT I HAD A NIGHTMARE... AND BELIEVE ME I LOOKED FOR JESUS, TO RESCUE ME.. I LOVE THE LIGHTER FEELING YOU HAVE HERE... I LIKE TO THINK ALL IS SILENCE IN THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WAY.. ENJOYED AND HAVE A BLESSED WONDERFUL DAY..P.D.
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