Afterglow

AFTER GLOW She said --- my skin is singing Night air dances with your kiss There’s ancient music ringing conducted by our bliss He said--my heart is racing Like there is more to come As my life is chasing To beat a mighty drum She said-- my eyes are blazing With colors never known Their pulsing is amazing a vision rarely shown he yawned and said --Sweet Darling Let’s hold each other tight Contemplate in silence Our most romantic night She yearned for all night talking To explore his inner mind But wisely kissed his ear good night-- To dig another time. Victoria Anderson-Throop 2013

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Rockman Pritts

Date: 4/22/2013 12:28:00 AM

Well done Victoria. This was a great write. You displayed the emotions very well. I enjoyed this one very much. If you would like to read how I approached the subject, try "Sweet Love" or "Lovers Moon". Thanks for sharing a very good read. The rhyme and rhytym were very pleasing. Rockman :-)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/10/2013 9:37:00 AM

lovely write Victoria, really a joy to read, hope you're having a blessed day, Gordon

Jennifer Perry

Date: 4/9/2013 5:56:00 PM

Lovely piece!

Richard Palmer

Date: 4/7/2013 4:57:00 AM

wonderful write Victoria,sounds like a nursery rhyme

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 4/7/2013 6:12:00 AM

glad you liked it....this one just came by itself...doesn't happen often to me...but sometimes.... it does sound like a nursery rhyme, although I didn't notice it until you mentioned it!