after you

gently burned away, my scars, in scars' fire— from the hollow gloom that bound us with desire; still I wear your flames on my sleeze— your gift, my touch— remember me....

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/3/2023 12:17:00 PM

powerful, subtle, intense - a pleasure

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 10/9/2023 7:34:00 PM

Never forgotten, fav Warmly A.S.

Deb M

Date: 9/27/2023 8:57:00 AM

What a powerful touching little poem Paige that just grabs you! Really enjoyed….Debx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/22/2023 1:22:00 PM

Short but permeated with emotion.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/22/2023 12:57:00 PM

You convey much with few lines, I like the imagery of 'hollow gloom' and 'scar's fire' - scars can burn deep, very powerful~

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 7:06:00 AM

oooh great strength.. life is always so much better when we move away from toxic people..

Bill Baker

Date: 9/21/2023 3:46:00 PM

I like the way you use intrigue in your closing line, Paige. An interesting read for me today, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2023 11:59:00 AM

This incredibly poignant and heartfelt poem truly ignites the depths of the soul, leaving me profoundly moved by every word. The enchanting rhymes are effortlessly captivating, painting a breathtakingly beautiful picture in the mind.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/21/2023 11:08:00 AM

Such an evocative and touching poem that is soul stirring: i felt every word here and your rhymes are so captivating and so beautiful! I especially love the line “ your gift my touch, remember me” ah! That hits home! Fave for me