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After the Storm

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Fog drapes Cascading sheet Suspended damp blanket Drapes emerald pines' limbs with wet Layers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/2/2015 9:25:00 PM
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something about the line"drapes emerald pines limbs with wet seems too hard to say. or bad flow. how about ?? drapes emerald limbs with wetness....
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/28/2015 10:16:00 AM
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Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/27/2015 1:18:00 PM
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Wonderful, descriptive cinquain, Sara! I can almost feel that damp blanket wrapping around me. Love, Kim
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/27/2015 10:02:00 AM
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Quite an excellent Cinquain.
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