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After the Storm

AFTER THE STORM Babes and birds breath a prayer wish upon gush of silky soppy swift swish. Merciful Zion must have heard for sometime the bleeding sky trot. A mile long grin peeps on vertured hills as prismatic shades speak as petals swells. Imprisoned now the storm in rainbow's chest as sun enfolds the shadows in zest. Across blue blooded ocean's breeze, jolly handsome feathers finally find the mist on bells bright blooming feast-- no longer bent or shadow kissed. Dimpled cheeks unfurl as dusk arise longing rest after a turbulent surprise. Sedulous moon and stars squire a light pageant-like prance for a night delight. Amidst heartstrings spelled dreams cotton strums from a guitar rang in stream Accompanied by rhymes from lapping waves sweet [oh, sweet], scars are healed Cuddled safe and secure the little girl snore in twinkling tunes. A dimpled cheek smile as she slumbers a long long while. © 8:39pm October 08. 2014

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John Fleming

Date: 1/4/2015 9:27:00 AM

As like all your work...full of colourful vibrancy and rich verse...excellent!! :) john.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 7:01:00 PM

Thanks much JOhn... :) I am encuraged to write more by your comment.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/13/2014 6:09:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi....well done! Will a muffin do?:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:59:00 AM

kindly bring a mug of coffee to go with it.. :D thanks Paul.. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2014 12:45:00 PM

Beautiful sweet write Olive many congrats on your win:-( hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:58:00 AM

thanks much sweet Jan.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/13/2014 12:05:00 PM

Wonderful write, Olive, congrats on the win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:57:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram.. :) GBu

Paul Callus

Date: 10/10/2014 4:43:00 PM

You give a lovely and calm atmosphere to nature after the storm has gone by. The final stanza is sweet and tender. (I like the grin on verdant hills!) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 9:22:00 PM

weeee.. I imagined myself in the last few lines.. but i dont snore.. :D hahhaha thanks PAul/ :D

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2014 1:04:00 PM

Dear Olive, You have created many beautiful images of things we see after storms pass. I especially enjoyed the third verse and your description of the " blue-blooded ocean's breeze." Here at the beach, we see the jolly-feathered birds returning after each storm. Wonder where they take shelter? Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 3:44:00 AM

thanks much Carolyn.. :) Maybe on caves and mangroves... :) I appreciate your encouraging comment.. :D

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 12:32:00 PM

Excellent "Sweet" poem, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 3:37:00 AM

thanks much MAurice. :) Iappreciate your frop by,,, :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2014 8:28:00 AM

Sweet write Olive especially the last stanza is so tender!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 3:35:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Upma.. :) I appreciate it.. :D