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After the Storm

The storm has blown itself away; there is a lighting of the sky. The monstrous waves start to recede, and the ripples just pass on by. The rocks find a new home from the pounding they have been given. They come to rest haphazardly, as though so hard they have been driven. The fence looks old, all gnarled and bent, a pathway almost hidden. The footsteps - where have they come from - and to where are they now bidden? An eerie cry - a sobbing sound - mixes harmoniously. With the sound of seagulls squawking, now setting off back to sea. The lights are lighting, one at a time, pinpricks of ghostly yellow. The sobbing increases just slightly; a voice so soft and mellow. ‘Come follow me, a prize awaits,' it sings out on the breeze. I find myself following it, my heart it seems to please. I have never felt so fresh, my heart it seems to float. I follow the pathway in the near dark; my being fills with hope. What is it, that is calling me? Is sounds so sweet and near. I stumble and realise I am soaked, but I am without any fear. ‘You are mine,’ says the voice so gentle and caressing. The light seems to grow brighter, I feel an urgent need pressing. I must find the source of this golden voice; its song fills my head. I must press on the winding path before me, I feel I am being lead. A shape that glows and points at me and opens its glowing arms wide. I stop as fear overtakes me; I want to turn back, like the tide. And then the shape embraces me, calms me and points behind. There I am lying on the beach; am I now losing my mind? ‘Your journey is just starting,’ the voice tells me. ‘Come, we can not be late.’ “Still round the corner there may wait, a new road or a secret gate.” Realisation comes to me as the shape pushes me onwards up the winding hill. My earthly body I have left behind, but my adventure is in front of me still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/20/2012 1:10:00 PM
Dear Mandy, Soup Mail. LOVE YOU ALWAYS...Harry
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Date: 12/20/2012 1:07:00 PM
Dear Mandy, I am reading all my Favorite POEMS again As I read this Sparkling Gem again I would put in my favs again. YOUR last Line seems very real to me now. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/19/2012 11:44:00 AM
Dear Mandy, This has to go in my Favorites. You have descibed and out of body experience extreemly wellI've heard that voice but always got sent back LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/19/2012 11:55:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Congratulations on YOUR Win in Tracie's Contest YOURS ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/19/2012 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Harry x
Date: 10/2/2012 7:09:00 AM
interesting saga is this Mandy, can see why it did so well in a contest, but i also like other aspect here as well, those that come throught as real life..excellent poem i do like this
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "What A Gem" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2012 4:04:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, a near-death experience? ethereal and memorable...
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Date: 2/8/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congrats....After your win.......George
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:58:00 AM
right on spot, mandy.. big applause on your win.. a tremendous write!..:) huggs!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/8/2012 10:19:00 AM
Thanks nette appreciate it x
Date: 2/8/2012 9:30:00 AM
congrats Mandy on a marvelous win for this beautiful gem of a write luv.. such lines of imagery takje one's breath away.. very flowing and descriptive...
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Date: 2/8/2012 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Lisa Marie xx
Date: 2/7/2012 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mandy with this "gem"
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/8/2012 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Bob xx
Date: 2/7/2012 10:22:00 PM
Congrats On your win in my contest Mandy..i loved this poem.. xx
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:12:00 AM
MANDY, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! AND CONGRATULATIONS IN THE contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/23/2011 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "In a land called fantasy" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:34:00 PM
Congrats Mandy on a super win for this great entry luv.. excellent lines for the contest..
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:26:00 PM
Quite a tale you have spun here Mandy. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/17/2011 4:48:00 AM
Terrific entry. Tony (Go yo soup mail)
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Date: 11/17/2011 5:31:00 AM
Thanks have replied on mail x

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