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After the Rains

The sensuous two as the rain cascades Droplets of pleasure like sweet lemonade Lips in lock exciting their desire To silken sheets they loving retire Whilst the winds carry droplets of rain Internally they connect creating loving champagne In sync, in rhythm, they joyously caress Their hips grinding in bodily bless The rains appease as their loving slows Two souls united in sensuous glow Face to face they lie in contented touch Eyes closed they sleep in tender clutch http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-13.php

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Date: 12/1/2010 2:05:00 PM
Hello James, Now this is how a women likes to be treated. Such a way with words young man. As Always, Shar
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Date: 9/18/2010 1:12:00 PM
I do enjoy your word usage. I took note of the use of "lie" in the second to last line. I have done the same within my own works. Very nifty.!
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:38:00 AM
Wow James, absolutely love it! PASSION in CAPITAL LETTERS. A favorite of mine :) Wilma Ps: Carolyn's comment had me smiling hehe
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:17:00 AM
wow, steamy little number that one, good way to start my holidays, reading great poetry
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:04:00 AM
The bill for my cold shower will be in the mail, James. LOL So passionate! There aren't many men with your sensual qualities here in the States. (moan) Love, Carolyn
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