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After the Party

He drank a sea Of Caribbean Rum Under the midnight sun Twenty-one candles Melted into icing on Pineapple upside-down Now the woman in his bed Is a stranger and his head Is made of woodpeckers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/8/2012 5:26:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Arnisha. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 3:16:00 PM
you've painted a very crisp clear picture here! i like it!
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Arnisha Paxman
Date: 5/7/2012 4:18:00 PM
I'm glad you've enjoyed it! :)
Date: 5/7/2012 1:39:00 PM
Arnisha sounds like regret..David
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Arnisha Paxman
Date: 5/7/2012 4:19:00 PM
Yep! :)

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