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After The Flood

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Written: April 12, 2024 Rumi Quote: "I am an ark in the swift flood of time, and my companions, a fellowship. Who throws in with us sails into light"
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When the rain has ceased its fall, The cloud-crowned cliff did not appall. Earth was covered—in droplets of dew, Such nature's tears morphed to renew.   A parched earth, now drenched and reborn, a sip of water from the heavenly well. A revived melody, full of zest, is born, Immanent strand to appear and swell.   Streams climb to an incredible height,  Whirling water that rises to sky sight. Growing stalwart—with every passing day, A majestic power—an ideal sight on display. Through night, it roars along its channel, Writhing as medieval dragon, sharp and primal. Gentle pull that a river exerts on this land, Streamsides are grasped—with slippery hand.  Swiping at everything suspended above, A river bearing treasures, filled with love. Behold, a creature from days of yore, With the creek's ebb and flow, it soars.    Yet, it has been tamed by mapping lore, A vessel spills with elegance at its core. Withdraws, inside its utter embrace, In buds of spring and summer's grace. Another eve, vivid in my thoughts, I recall, Creeks, unyielding, challenged its wall. An endless stream, defying restriction, Yet spills result in cascade of repetition. Perpetual recitation of the same refrain, Aqueous pantomime in endless waltz remains. Once again, a symphony of spillage took place, Imminent smashing down slopes, still in race.  A network of flowing streams teems with life, Graceful rivers meander, untouched by strife. Filling their shorelines with water galore, There has never been a scene as this before. Hastening to unite with twisting wellness, Dance of motion—symphony of awareness. It leaves no room for anything in its path, Whirlwind of disorder—harmonious wrath   This betrayal caused such profound damage, With a heavy spirit, tears are now baggage. Streams disinterest was obvious to me,  Its ear is mute—and unwilling to foresee.   With grace, it moved, following nature's call, In one fleeting moment, it outshone us all.  Defeating our intellect with power so pure, A humble force, its victory secure.   Abodes, assets, and souls were wiped away, We swirled as a breath, transient but idly by. Following a day, the beast anger waned, And sun shone brightly and gently reigned.
    

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Date: 4/13/2024 9:26:00 AM
Your poem beautifully captures the transformative power of water, from the gentle droplets of dew renewing the earth to the majestic force of rivers carving their paths through the landscape. The imagery is vivid and stirring, painting scenes of nature's resilience and raw beauty. The tranquil flow of streams with the primal force of a raging river highlights the dual nature of water, both nurturing and formidable.
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:26:00 AM
The poem's exploration of themes such as renewal, destruction, and the awe-inspiring might of the natural world resonates deeply, leaving a lasting impression on the reader. It's a powerful reminder of the forces beyond our control and the enduring strength of the earth.
Date: 4/13/2024 7:56:00 AM
A brilliant panorama of the flood. So well described with your usual flair of style. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/13/2024 6:15:00 AM
Splendid images throughout, my friend, depicting the aftermath of flood, devastating life. So poetically described, Lasaad: --Perpetual recitation of the same refrain, Aqueous pantomime in endless waltz remains. Once again, a symphony of spillage took place, Imminent smashing down slopes, still in race--powerful diction adorns your poetry, as always.
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:12:00 AM
I loved how you did this, and wow to the music as well,its a match!
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Date: 4/12/2024 8:19:00 PM
You have dealt with rain and its effects on nature in all its stages, the sudden rain drenching the parched land, the continuous rains filling rivers and water bodies and the torrential rain leading to flood and causing havoc. As the rain stayed only for a day, the flood subsided and sky turned blue with sun shining bright. I visualize all these in my mind. Your poem is so picturesque with vivid imagery and beautiful metaphors.The comparison of a roaring river to primal dragon is so very apt. "Through night, it roars along its channel, Writhing as medieval dragon, sharp and primal." Beautiful poem. All the best dear friend.
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Date: 4/12/2024 5:18:00 PM
a true masterpiece, dearest Sotto. Such wonderful imagery you created with your pen and your imagination. I felt the power of the torrential rain and the subsequent flood ( betrayal caused such profound damage, with a heavy spirit, tears are now baggage. I also felt grace (With grace, it moved, following nature's call. ) I'd say this is a sure-fire contest winner. Have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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