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Dianne K. Baker, my sister-in-law, and the narrator of this poem. She was a loving and caring person committed to a loveless and abusive relationship to the point of losing herself. 

poem written for "After the Flood" poetry contest, Anoucheck Gangabisson, sponsor

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I demolished my own walls, opened the flood gates, and let you in; they warned and admonished me from the danger of your existence. Yet somehow, I was still enthralled mesmerized by the unprecedented phenomena you brought. I disregarded their warnings and entered your danger zone. My soul found solace and felt mitigated in your arms. I am not terrified of your tremendous storms; I am willing to embrace your disastrous nature. My love, I am your victim, and it's a privilege to submerge myself in you. I accept the severity of the damage that it might cause me. I am the sufferer. You are the love that caused losses terror blood. Still those reasons will not restrain me from loving a catastrophe like you. My love, It is my responsibility to ensure at all costs your safety and well-being You are the flood, and afterwards I promise to calm you despite what you do to me.

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Date: 4/18/2024 9:26:00 AM
I love poems like this. The hurts, the pain. "I am not terrified of your tremendous storms; I am willing to embrace your disastrous nature." We all want what kills us so bad. We love pain, wounds. The injury gives us pleasure.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/18/2024 4:46:00 PM
I agree to some extent, Tonye. Injury gives us pleasure in the lessons we learn. Glad you like this type of poem. Thanks for your visit today, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/13/2024 4:35:00 PM
Sara - Interesting and thought-provoking depiction of what sounds like a deeply painful situation.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/13/2024 6:19:00 PM
thank you, David, for your visit and for your comments. Yes, it was a painful situation. Enjoy the remainder of your weekend, Sara
Date: 4/13/2024 9:29:00 AM
Hey Sara your poem poem is a powerful exploration of love's complexities and the willingness to embrace both its beauty and its destructive potential. The imagery of demolishing walls and opening floodgates to let someone in evokes a sense of vulnerability and surrender. Despite warnings and admonitions, the speaker is drawn to the captivating and unprecedented nature of their love.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/13/2024 6:19:00 PM
I appreciate your mindful comments, Silent One. I appreciate your insights into the imagery. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 4:21:00 PM
Well, your sister was a saint. Pure as gold. May she see her reward in Heaven. ~ Gershon
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:23:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Gershon, and for your kind and mindful words. She passed a few years ago. I think God had mercy on her in her passing. I'm confident she's in Heaven. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 1:01:00 PM
Such a romantic poem, despite its ups and downs.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:23:00 PM
thank you, Victor. Appreciate your visit and comments. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 12:39:00 PM
Dear Sara, your poem explores the intricate dance of love, capturing the captivating yet treacherous nature of this complex emotion. Your writing skillfully conveys the complexities of love, painting a vivid picture of its joys and challenges. The use of recurring words enhances the emotional bond between you and your sister, giving the poem a profound resonance.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:25:00 PM
I appreciate your insightful and wise words, dear Sotto. Indeed, love is an intricate and complex dance. Wishing you a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 10:43:00 AM
When we are moved by the outside as well as the within -- we are more balanced and complete. Love inspires understanding -- emotional growth. A thoughtful, brave and honest write.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:26:00 PM
thank you, Joe, for your insightful words. True, love inspires emotional growth. I like that. Glad you appreciated my poem for its bravery and honesty. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 10:03:00 AM
Wow you took it metaphorically. How ingenious. Love it. Wish I thought of doing it this way!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:27:00 PM
aww, thank you Andrea. Glad you appreciate the metaphorical write. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 9:49:00 AM
Nice poem. We face these situations many time in our life. Nice personification of flood as lover.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:27:00 PM
thank you, Jay. Much appreciate your visit and your words this evening, Sara
Date: 4/12/2024 7:22:00 AM
A deep and very thought provoking poem that brings to mind the many incidents in life that coincide with a wild personage. I enjoyed the dynamic power of this poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 5:28:00 PM
thanks for reading my poem and for your insights. Color me grateful for your visits. Have a wonderful evening, hugs, Sara

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