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After the Fall

I am going to get up now, But I am not taking your hand. My knees are shaking, but I will be fine. I may be in pain, But life always seems to go on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/11/2010 1:29:00 PM
That's okay to hold on to a hand. One must always stand up, brush off the dirt, and move on with life. I like the essence of the message in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:47:00 PM
this was well written, appropriate for even those who never seem to fall. thank you, chuck
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:44:00 PM
a nice pick me up when we can not break a fall, but remember with every fall there is something bigger straight ahead. Enjoyed your poetry,..Sidney LeeAnn
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