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After Light the Fire

- a solo nijuin renku - English version by Liviu Martinescu the first butterfly erupting crater or sap at work in the grove a mountain sprig on fire two irises in bloom the flames of those feathers illuminate the cup of our last tea the book as well as the candle transgress reality winter moon a spark of burning ice over things from the past from the depths of the mirror render me this person to the snow in your absence moths swirl round my eyesight the spurt of o symphony advancing in a mass of wax sacred scarabaeous that can only survive by devouring itself how the passage of thoughts through the lamp bulb can hurt two suns for one town in a subterranean star space is no more how the rainbow soaks up the light of angels giving the wheel a spin I could see against the spikes her dreamlike face the silence of the falling leaf on sizziling shoulders sun-flooded gate the moon bouncing off every blessed chestnut when autumn comes the form takes off to the world of my other self the blind musician warming his hands the red tulips I will only be able to play during that hour the clock utterly lacks home again the wild rose curls round the guitar May wind dilating the fire after the light had its chance

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Date: 11/2/2011 6:01:00 PM
This was awesome!!! very talented poet Always, Laura
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Date: 10/3/2011 1:55:00 AM
Multumesc pentru comentariu. Sint si alti romani aici de exemplu: Monica-Cristina Moldoveanu si altii. Daca apesi din cind in cind pe WHO IS ONLINE la stinga ecranului pe la mijloc vei vedea steagurile membrilor. Daca te duci la prima pagina la dreapta la blog-uri citeste articolul meu care va fi publicat intr-o revista din San Diego in doua zile...
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:56:00 AM
Welcome to our Poetry Soup, Constantin! Lovely poem. You'll find this site very interesting and you'll feel at home. Best, iolanda
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:08:00 AM
a brilliant poem,.. i really am enjoying it for the second time,,, and sharing it with a friend,.. have a nice one,..p.d.
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Constantin Severin
Date: 10/2/2011 1:05:00 AM
many thanks, you are very kind, happy to have such a nice welcome at my first entrance on this amazing site!
Date: 10/1/2011 7:21:00 AM
I like this alot your clever/smart in your effort and you may like my style check me out. Don't be turned of by the length of my poems please. I need another's opinion and see if you understand bird's song. I would value your opinion.
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Constantin Severin
Date: 10/2/2011 1:04:00 AM
thanks, karl, i also love your poetry, it's so expressive and very close to the mystery of the universe...

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