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Soon after the sky had shed her liquid sorrow When dark clouds quickly vanished It turned immaculate, spotlessly blue. As the cosmic hiss subsided And the wind withdrew to its unknown hideout, There was a hush- the hush that follows, As the priest concludes his spirited sermon. In that quiet, when dream and life coalesced I saw the leaves trembling in the cold Dragonflies performing a ballet in the air Their wings catching glints of sunlight Spiders moving round crystal studded webs, Repairing the broken filaments of their gossamer And birds from trees taking off into the sky Enjoying a pervasive sense of peace And my heart soaked in pure mirth Humming the lyrics of a half forgotten song I walked down through cobbled paths Feeling the wetness beneath my feet, To savor the beauty of Nature, Newly bathed in the profuse vernal shower. Suddenly the light blazoned, Giving a golden glow to the leaves And the suspended rain drops, Glittered like sparkling gems. Mesmerized by the beauty of the scene There wobbled shiny silver droplets of joy In my eyes too, struggling to be spilled out! Resubmitted for 2022 Marathon Mile.No.15 Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mark Toney Placed Sixth April.6. 2022 A Brian Strand Premier Choice Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Date: 4/14/2022 11:49:00 AM
Valsa, these lines are mesmerizing in their unique poetic images - your trademark dear friend - "wobbled shiny silver droplets of joy" just one of the many imagination capturing pictures! So beautifully done with your gentle touch. Congratulations on your win! Love your rain splashed world of inspiration!
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Date: 4/13/2022 7:21:00 AM
Humming the lyrics of a half-forgotten song... my favorite line. Excellent write... Ann
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Date: 4/8/2022 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your win. enjoyed. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 4/8/2022 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Valsa. I am amazed with the descriptive vocabulary you have used - took my breath away. This goes to my fave - to read many times. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/8/2022 4:25:00 AM
Such a beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2022 6:53:00 PM
An amazing write, Valsa! Congrats on your win. Fave for me :)
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful penning, Valsa, for this to be placed on my Fave list is enough said my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 4/7/2022 5:51:00 AM
Back with congratulations dear friend for your fabulous win! This is truly a masterpiece!
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Date: 4/6/2022 2:21:00 PM
Valsa, you have written a truly beautiful poem. Your thoughts erupt in a riot of hues and magical dust. Following the rain, you create a gorgeous picture of nature that is also filled with feelings and done in professional squiggles. You have a talent for describing scenes in such a lovely way with words, and I admire that.
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:36:00 PM
Dear friend, you always gift me with such wonderful words of appreciation . It is always a delight reading your comments ! You are a great poet, making your poems special with wonderful vocabulary and depth of thoughts.... ! Thanks a lot
Date: 4/6/2022 11:32:00 AM
Well said! Rain is so nourishing! Aloha!
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thanks a lot Rico for visiting my poems on a regular basis
Date: 4/6/2022 10:20:00 AM
Great pen Valsa, as I do agree with Jenny's words being so true as this is filled with such good colour and imagery. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Gordon ! Thank you for the appreciation of my poem.
Date: 4/6/2022 6:06:00 AM
Your imagination trancends all places and times and falls peacefully, easily and gracefully into a space of poetic bliss, where you and your quill find the alone time to put down your fresh, thoughts which tumble out in a torrid of colors and magic powder which you add as a final ingredient to each poem. Superb poetry. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/6/2022 7:02:00 AM
Your comments are so uplifting that I am swept off my feet ! Wonder if I deserve so much ! However your generous words have fueled my enthusiasm and have given me immense delight ! Thank you so much sweet soul for your very poetic comment ! Hugs and blessings
Date: 4/6/2022 5:16:00 AM
Lovely capture of the images, Valsa. A painting of nature after the rain-- blended with emotions in expert brush-strokes. Win BIG!
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:57:00 AM
I am learning much from poets like you ! Here I get exposed to beautiful poems ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Date: 4/6/2022 1:44:00 AM
Marvellous poem. You have a knack of using words that describe scenes in so beautiful a manner. Well done.
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:55:00 AM
Thanks a lot veteran poet ! Your opinion is dearly counted !
Date: 4/6/2022 12:35:00 AM
I loved that a priest, a sermon, made it into this most environmentally - friendly of scenes. The last2 lines are superlative. ThanX in Jesus
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:54:00 AM
I am sure you are very familiar with that silence or hush once when a fiery sermon comes to a stop ! Glad you enjoyed my analogy, Anil brother !
Date: 4/5/2022 9:42:00 PM
What a stunning descriptions in vivid imagery!!! After the rain, there is beauty that's only visible in the poet's eyes. Masterfully done!!
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:50:00 AM
Jez, so happy you liked my poem ! Thanks a lot dear !
Date: 4/5/2022 8:01:00 PM
Cosmic hiss subsided ... ThanX sister Valsa. I need to return to this gem. Shalom shalom
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Date: 4/6/2022 6:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Anil . So happy you wish to return to my poem once again !

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