After Death

Chaos severe hate Terror reigns burning hellfire And brimstone beckons Russell Sivey

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2011 12:07:00 AM

woe! very steep and true... i think we where life the wrong way at times. Thanks for sharing another wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night R.S.,~ LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/24/2011 4:59:00 PM

I must say there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Russell. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 10:32:00 PM

Scary death for some to look forward to. Love the way you said the last line.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 9:44:00 PM

yes but think of those streets of gold Russell.. after death a new life luv.. but your words present great imagery of this fire and brimstone if one leads life in the fast lane luv..oh boy..