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After All These Years Together

. ~Hers~ I know you almost as well as I know myself over the years I have learned your moods, your face each expression each crease, each worry line, each crinkle around the eyes.. Where they began... why they are there. Would I erase them if I could? Never... For if I could, if they were no longer a part of you... it would take away your past and mine.. and ours together...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 2:33:00 PM
Very nice. True companionship as it should be. Thanks for your comments on my haiku. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/17/2009 1:40:00 PM
True love in its true form. Knowing. Discerning. This is beautiful. The last stanza is lovely. Love, Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 9:25:00 AM
Your talent is always such a pleasure to read Carrie. :) This is such a warm expression of love. Hugs!
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:46:00 AM
Now this is true love expressed...he is a lucky man....
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Date: 8/17/2009 12:16:00 AM
A love poem from the heart Carrie.Hope he has read it.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/15/2009 6:36:00 PM
You are so in love....I am digging your heart and beauty in this write...I think I am falling in love. :)
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Date: 8/15/2009 5:21:00 PM
Carrie, this poem is so beautiful. I know it came straight from your heart and that makes it more beautiful still. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 1:12:00 PM
A wonderful tribute, to a lucky guy, God bless Carrie. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/15/2009 1:11:00 PM
Carrie wonderful words about the love of your life! I can relate so well! Laura :)
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Date: 8/15/2009 12:09:00 PM
Carrie, beautiful poem. Your love for your husband comes through clearly and your poem made me think of my husband who is traveling today. Thanks. Krista
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