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After a Trip

You look at your pictures back home from a trip And somehow it doesn’t quite seem You really were there, with that smile on your face – You’d swear it was only a dream. Yet there is the proof, in each pose you peruse – The scenery gorgeous and clear. The photos are tip of the iceberg, somehow – The same goes for each souvenir. You cannot recapture the way that you felt – Sensations each sight did provoke; Vacations, like dreams, are quite real when you’re there But returning, they vanish like smoke. You print up the pictures or fashion a book And do all you can do to remember; Each image, like fire, though, once so intense, In the end fades away to an ember.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/13/2013 2:13:00 PM
This a sad pen... and well penned... Perhaps epitaph... Just Conjecture~A.O
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:02:00 AM
Loved this poem . I thought about all the trips I took with my wife.Now that she has died it all seems like a dream. Your words brought it all back. I may look at the album today and try to remember. Thank you Ilene.
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Date: 4/13/2013 7:18:00 AM
Veerrry true....oh the memories are the best....
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Date: 4/12/2013 9:48:00 PM
this is a wonderful poem . Enjoyed stopping by this evening. Thank you for sharing, ~Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2013 9:12:00 PM
The funny thing is after you have travelled you look yourself in the mirror and find that you are the same old person. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/12/2013 8:05:00 PM
It is so true,Ilene,..........I often think the best part of a trip/vacation is the anticipation and the planning of it....I like this interesting subject for your poem.
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Date: 4/12/2013 5:41:00 PM
Very well written. Enjoyed the read very much.
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