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Afraid To Dance

Your eyes, your words they so entrance such magic from a simple glance t'would be an honor to take a chance, the truth, alas, I'm afraid to dance

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Date: 11/15/2014 10:16:00 PM

Very nice piece! Enjoyed it! A 7 for me! :) love and hugs! xxxx D

David Brown
Date: 11/17/2014 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Dorian

Date: 11/14/2014 6:02:00 PM

Provocative, evocative...your fluid lines make me think of the best red wines! Thanks for sharing this David. New friend Kim:)

David Brown
Date: 11/15/2014 6:10:00 PM

Why thank you new friend, but this ain't the end, I simply can't wait to read what you've penned!

Date: 11/14/2014 5:48:00 PM

beautiful rhyme David:-) Hugs Jan x

David Brown
Date: 11/15/2014 6:08:00 PM

Thanks as always, kind lady :)