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In quest to find respite and solitude spiritual food it's to the sea I owe my gratitude Only in my dreams while adrift under starlight and moonbeams I'm free of life's schemes In slumber I sail upon the vast sea peace prevails in me afloat in absolute serenity My burdens at rest rhythmic waves gently lull me in their nest comfort in my breast I am protected as Neptune's daughter on tranquil water with no thought of being life's poor martyr Oh, how much I yearn to stay in the swells as long as they churn to shore ne'er return I have enlightenment and harmony the way life should be quite content in my placid times at sea Quiet realm of calm my heart fears no threat of distress or qualm I am free from harm I let go of the past without a care free from all despair cleansed my soul and to God I lay it bare
_______________________________________________________________ Written while listening to "Angel of Hope" by Omar Akram ~https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mXNaxGj6A5A These monorhyming verses were written in the form of syllable count beginning with 10-5-10 and alternating with 5-10-5. I have no idea if this is a sanctioned form, but it is the way I chose to present it. February 3rd, 2016 ~ Solitary Moments ~ Mystic Rose

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Date: 2/9/2016 4:07:00 PM
Wow Lin, this is amazing..Congrats on your placement lovely lady :) -luloo *smiles* *congrats*
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thanks a lot, my smiling friend.
Date: 2/9/2016 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Lin for your prize winning poem. Once again I bow to your superiority, I'm not on my knees! LOL Peace
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Date: 2/9/2016 1:40:00 PM
lol Daniel. No bowing either, for this time we are equal. Thanks.
Date: 2/7/2016 2:49:00 PM
you've got a good solitary moment, that's a nice write Lin, and....i sanction this if none do
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Date: 2/7/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you for your stamp of approval, Sage! lol
Date: 2/6/2016 8:29:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for all of your wonderful compliments, Funom. Your words and rating are most generous.
Date: 2/3/2016 6:18:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Lin, A7. I only wish my sleep was restful!
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Date: 2/4/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I'm sorry you don't sleep well. It's been the same for me for a couple years. A few hours and then I'm awake. ;(
Date: 2/3/2016 4:12:00 PM
Gorgeous poem...
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Date: 2/3/2016 4:33:00 PM
Hi, Keith. Thank you very much for your kind compliment.

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