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Afghan Glory

A poem by John Nesbitt © 22.11.2013 I was eighteen years old and wanting to fight I found what I looked for, in bars late at night I took on the big guys, the small ones as well They were all tough, as far as I could tell - As a jobless young man, proud of my country I joined up with the army and trained how not to be They told me I’d fight to keep us all free So that we’d never have to bend the knee They trained me in weapons, unarmed combat too The use of explosives and what they could do And how to take cover behind rocks and trees They taught me to find bombs and those I E D’s - So step up to the plate boys, start waving the flag We’ll be all draped with medals when it’s all in the bag Think of the glory, this conflict will bring A few months away, then we can all sing - On my very first mission, I was told to unwind I took lead position, when searching for mines The blast threw me up twenty feet in the air I couldn’t feel my feet for they were no longer there My right arm was shattered my left fingers gone I once had two ears but now only one I thought I was dying, I couldn’t hear a thing I wasn’t thinking of the medals or being dressed up with bling - Now all I can do is sit here on the floor and wonder what it all had been for my comrades call around from time to time I can see their discomfort when they’re thinking of mine They wouldn’t trade places, no matter what for They each have their memories, of that terrible war My fighting days over, no more blood and guts So I’ll settle right down in my terrible rut - I stepped up to the plate boys and I waved the flag But I’m not draped in medals and it’s not in the bag I thought of the glory the conflict would bring No legs, no fingers and in no mood to sing - Things soon will be over in Afghanistan Talks are on-going with the Taliban We struggled against them for thirteen hard years But all we produced was billions of tears Fathers lost sons and Mothers lost child business got rich, there were deals on the side Where’s the next country they’ll start a new war Persia? Korea? Let’s hope….. it’s…. not ….yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/30/2016 12:43:00 PM
JOHN, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 9/24/2014 5:36:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,John - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2014 8:15:00 PM
John, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/20/2014 12:41:00 PM
What a deep powerful piece this is, John. I have a son in the military and share the concerns you expressed in this excellent write. I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 9/20/2014 11:57:00 AM
Very powerful this and emotional as well. You write very well, your narrative style is great and your sense of ryhming too: It never gets "easy" or "cliché". I like thix quite a lot, it makes one think. Make love not war!
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John Nesbitt
Date: 2/11/2017 8:34:00 AM
That was the messge. Loud and clear, I hope.

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