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Affliction

-AFFLICTION- My poverty drove a Ferrari My monkey rode a horse Bad luck was hitch-hiking Overtaken by a Porschè Slamdunk my face with dishes in the sink Screamed so loud at nothing pulling faces in the dark Walking with a white cane Talking with The White Man Unseen, unheard, so I did not have to think Obscene, blackbird ,singing like a lark Broken semi quaver Swimming in the river Reasoning with know-alls Confusion is an eight ball What youre not going tell the man Is the something you can not say Plastic horses returning on a rotating carousel My transgressions stay in rehab My anger burns in hell Bland stupidity clings to me O hear that urgent summons! Tolling in the valley Such a sacrificial bell

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Date: 10/3/2016 5:49:00 AM
Sounds like a catalogue of things "rehab" would tell you you cannot change. But acceptance and subscription are not the same.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 4/4/2017 10:45:00 PM
Robert" that loves war"I am late in thanking you and just for my impertinence I stole your comment line and slapped it into my other poem Matters of the Heart. Read ut and let me know. A belated thank you
Date: 9/10/2016 4:43:00 AM
I like that. Plastic horses on a rotating carousel and transgressions staying in rehab...This is very well written.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/10/2016 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Kai, I am an active follower on your poetry now as well
Date: 8/31/2016 8:43:00 AM
I love that first line. Fun to read, and pops in your seat for a fast ride. Ending in those lovely last two lines, and their endearing image.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/8/2016 1:42:00 AM
Hi Scott. Always look forward to your visit and comments, thank you

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