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Affection

In a white living room I was surrounded by rivers of affection streams red with a foreign kind of love they entangled and paired and connections were perceivable among gazes and words dressed in silver and pink I was there and yet somehow omitted as friends are sometimes when the blood-related gather I was counting the words like lazy raindrops or sheep when I fall asleep getting lost in the numbers I stopped while a few shy words stumbled out of my mouth awkwardly positioned I smiled a few times and found my space in the corner of a couch while the lilies of affection kept booming

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Date: 8/5/2020 10:35:00 PM
Laura, this is a fantastic write! Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 8/2/2020 1:48:00 PM
Deep personal poem... Expressed do well.
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Date: 8/1/2020 10:41:00 PM
Check the typing of the word ‘corner’. This poem is adorable! I liked it ever so much.
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Laura Labno
Date: 8/2/2020 2:54:00 AM
Thank you, Caren ! :)

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