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Advice To the Carefree

Too long you’ve dodged the pendulum of life Skipping between the strokes of the clock Dancing away the hope of dreams Making a mockery of parents judicial advice Time it is to get serious wipe the play from off your lives Run to the fields and plant your goals What you sow you shall surely reap For Debbie Guzzi's contest: Let's Get Serious

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 1:56:00 PM
yes, as Linda-Marie said, great words of wisdom here, my friend
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Date: 9/3/2012 7:44:00 AM
tremendous words of wisdom Joy .. truly is time to get serious about life and responsibilities .. best wishes luv ..
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/4/2012 9:19:00 AM
Thanks LM...love and healing to you dear friend!
Date: 9/2/2012 7:07:00 PM
Biblical wisdom in this work. Nice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/3/2012 12:31:00 AM
One love Matthew...tnx
Date: 9/2/2012 12:50:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Great advice for one does reap what they sow in one way or another..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/3/2012 12:30:00 AM
Blessed love Sara...thanks
Date: 9/1/2012 9:57:00 PM
This write is pure fact and the whole truth simply put into a short but very effective poem! I really enjoyed the straight to the point write, we must find ourselves so we can reap the benefits of what we sow(or sometimes accept to bad too)! What an awesome piece, Great Work!!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 10:10:00 PM
Tnx Russell for seeing what I think.
Date: 9/1/2012 9:31:00 PM
Point the arrow forward.
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 10:03:00 PM
Ok Johnny...do you always make people giggle uncontrollable like this? Tnx..one love!
Date: 9/1/2012 9:25:00 PM
like this Joy, there is a time to start to reap no matter how long we put it off we all must reap what we sow xx
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 10:01:00 PM
Tnx Mandy...one love!

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