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Adventures of Love

Take me to the ends of love, In your chariot of skin. Embrace my heart with caring hands, As we ride love’s trail again. My conscious is inebriated, From your intoxicating kiss. Our thoughts make endless love, Within a mental abyss. Hold on tight and don’t let go, As sweet passion ensues. Grasp the pleasure, the end is near, In the adventures of me and you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/17/2009 6:19:00 AM
Total control of the magic, the magical moment displayed like a violin against the ear. You, sir, are an eternal deserver of esteem.
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:07:00 PM
Your conclusion was on point. Under examination, your work reveals great details.
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:30:00 PM
Chariot of skin, wow you have so many great line but that was my favorite one.
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Date: 12/9/2009 5:42:00 PM
This is a beautiful love poem...Enjoyed reading your works tonight...Marty
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Date: 12/8/2009 9:21:00 PM
Wonderful as always and I do so enjoy your work....The Southern Belle
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:56:00 PM
Wonderfully passionate and emotional words from your pen, Raul, maybe Jared should read this one to give him some encouragement that this kind of love exists... thankxxx for sharing .. enjoyed.. blessings.. luv... thankxxx... for reading my poetry also... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/7/2009 3:36:00 PM
Very passionate write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/7/2009 3:33:00 AM
Lovely poem, enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 12/6/2009 10:05:00 PM
Wow Raul,Embrace my heart with caring hands,Our thoughts makes endless love,end love the end-The adeventures of me and you..loved these verses,passionate and sweet--Charma
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Date: 12/6/2009 7:36:00 PM
a heated moment in passion and bliss between sweet lovers!!!!!!!!
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