Adrift

Adrift I found myself adrift alone out on the sea a leaky boat no overcoat and very little brie The tide began to shift great waves engulfing me they pulled me down without a sound and I could not swim free But low there was a rift-- a crack in time--to be a way to win and to begin returning from the sea... ©deborah burch 1242013

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/4/2013 7:58:00 AM

There's a childlike innocence which is very appealing in your writing! L & L

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 6:19:00 PM

!!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/11/2016 7:06:00 PM

Thank you! Big hug. Deb

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/29/2013 9:32:00 AM

Cool... Where in time did you end up?

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/29/2013 10:16:00 AM

Lol. Thank you Carol. I'm not sure yet. I don't think the journey's over. Good to hear from you. Hope all is well. Big hugs love deb

David Williams

Date: 1/25/2013 1:41:00 AM

Cap'n Deb you have been so long at sea you must be less than half the size you were and your beautiful skin must be all wrinkly and brown, oh hang on sorry I was thinking of a fishing net ha ha ha....absolutely delighted to see that great smile and your lovely words here, please get signed permission from us before you leave on another little jolly....David

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/25/2013 8:10:00 PM

BAAAHAHAHAHAA!!! Too funny!! I'm still LOL!!! And Sir, YesSir! Signed permission LOL!! Thank you?? Big Big Huggss!! Love ya bunches, Cap'n Deb