Adrift

You are adrift In my ocean thoughts Your mouth is a current I am swept under

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Heather Ober

Date: 3/28/2013 12:38:00 PM

This one is stunning! "In my ocean thoughts" - I love that. I'm adding this little beauty to my faves.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2013 2:29:00 PM

this is good sensuality. I love a short poem like this one. Great to see your very first post here.

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/19/2013 1:46:00 PM

This is cool...

Mark Goodson

Date: 6/10/2012 1:27:00 PM

Jeremy, I Loved this poem. Keep up the good work.

Saurabh Gupta

Date: 6/10/2012 6:31:00 AM

lovely done......nice write...........

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2012 9:48:00 PM

JEARMY ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***

Joseph May

Date: 5/22/2012 1:55:00 PM

nicely done

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 10:00:00 AM

you know, I can tell you are a great thinker by the depth of your very profoundness in such short and simple word usage. Very exceelnt poetry here! Cindy Lu

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 9:59:00 AM

you know, I can tell you are a great thinker by the depth of your very profoundness in such short and simple word usage. Very exceelnt poetry here! Cindy Lu

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/12/2012 2:44:00 AM

Very nice... Terry