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The sun shines again for he smiles dreaming. The indeterminable day no longer flees or hides for its end is sought, as is its beginning as I lay beside him in love seeming. Though at peace, confusion’s thoughts abide waiting there as laggard servants shying scolded by the Mistress Aphrodite his form akin to Lord Ares lying. Now, Want must find a different dwelling and Need must now within my heart reside for oh love, sweet love, has come a calling on the wings of Eros it did arrive. For he smiles and joy of sweetest joy, I cry. to stay forever in his arms, I’ll try. Poet: D. Guzzi 6/14/11

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Date: 6/23/2011 6:52:00 PM
I love sonnets and this one is just great.
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Date: 6/17/2011 11:41:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in 'Sonnets', Debs : )
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 10:35:00 PM
Beatiful, Debs! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:55:00 PM
congrats on your 6th place win in the contest Debbie, wonderful sonnet, just wonderful
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:54:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win with this splendid Sonnet luv..enjoy another wow win..
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:15:00 PM
this was very nice I enjoyed the 2nd stanza best. love cory
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:33:00 PM
Yeah, I likes it Debs, and the first and third stanzas in particular ....maybe those goldarned iambs could be made to earn their pay a bit more....as always, best wishes ...Syd
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:28:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Debbie. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:45:00 AM
A beautiful write here dear poet ! You def. have a way with these writes my friend ! I enjoyed very much ! Have a beautiful week Debbie ! much love, james
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:18:00 AM
Very poetic sonnet..Enjoyed reading this morn..If for a contest, good luck..Thanks for stopping by my work about the Bilberry Kiss..I should have said that the American Blueberry and Huckleberry are closely related to the European Bilberry..Sara
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