Admiration

Into her eyes I enter, free of unctuous pretense, my daughter, so I can feel it all as she.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Tara Jennings

Date: 4/19/2019 4:22:00 PM

Little ones feel and experience everything with the joy of newness. Somehow I have lost that, but I remember the thrill of discovery. Seeing the world through my childs eyes make me feel alive and frightened at the same time. Going to faves

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2019 10:21:00 AM

Love it! So sweet...

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2019 4:25:00 PM

Nice...

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/12/2019 2:47:00 PM

Laconic write filled with love and admiration for a sweetheart and an apple of the eye.. a pleasure to read. Blessings.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/12/2019 7:13:00 AM

Beautiful sentiment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2019 3:17:00 PM

This is brilliant David! I hope you had happy holidays and wish you blessings in this new year! : ) xxoo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2019 2:39:00 PM

ohh, endearingly sweet for daddy's girl, david!... huggs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/11/2019 10:46:00 AM

Eyes are the window to the soul. This is beautiful, in so many amazing ways. :) I am smiling. ~ Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2019 7:31:00 AM

As seen through the innocent eyes of a two year old. Creative. Regards // paul

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2019 3:50:00 AM

Almost too exquisite for words. No. Truly Too exquisite for words. No almost about it David.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/10/2019 11:54:00 PM

metempsychosis!

David Byrne
Date: 1/11/2019 12:06:00 AM

no empathy, but interesting observation.