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Adios

Many can say they have seen but few ever knew. The man behind the work. So dont question when ya hear the news. Crying without a clue. We all follow a road to each his own. Your's i hope reflects happiness. But the one im on is cold and alone. Take my words and hold them close. And feel there pain. For my friends for now it's adios. Im not bitter far from the fact. whats the use to try. When ya know the deck is stacked. From a place im no longer willing to return. The chapter is written. For whom it does concern. I ask you to laugh often and recall. Failed efforts in a quest. That crashed into this invisable wall. there are no fingers to point for I alone share the blame. Forget the action and forever remember the name. Take this lost soul wrap it in your arms and forever keep it close. Listen to the wind for my friends this is adios.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/5/2009 2:59:00 PM
aww come on....get a new horse! go on a trip, go help someone! Buck up buckeroo! Light & Love
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Date: 10/5/2009 1:45:00 PM
No adios..friends never leave... you'll be fine..you'll be writing..here is our family.no goodbyes John..the site wont be the same without you mygood friend..very sad..you'll stay--you friend across the pond--Charma
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Date: 9/30/2009 11:16:00 AM
oh my dear it's more than awesome i love every single word in it :)
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Date: 9/29/2009 9:37:00 AM
my god john i love this =0 .... <3 beautiful i thank you much for sharing it it is...amazing. grabs my soul and wraps itself aroudn it tightly. awesome work xoxo rain
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Date: 9/29/2009 9:33:00 AM
The sadness in your poem is so moving, John. You are an important part of the Soup family and I hate to think we won't have the priviledge of reading more of your work. If you're just saying "adios" to troubles that have plagued you recently, then that is a welcome relief. But I will hold you in my heart and hope to see more of your outstanding poetry. Love you, John! Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2009 7:59:00 AM
This is a very nice write. sad..hope this is really not a goodbye. BG
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Date: 9/29/2009 7:30:00 AM
Like the way this one is put together. I do hope that this is not really good-bye. Keep writing. Sara
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