Get Your Premium Membership

Adieu To Summers

Adieu to Summers Scorching heat and shimmering sunlight, Baked you perfect, yet a zestful delight, Purposeful longer days, there was much to do, Sweaty nights of summers, bid them adieu, Crispy dry leaves now racing on road, Majestic scenic beauty can anyone hoard? As yellow and orange to greens' replace, Be ready to feel an autumn grace ! August 31st, 2014 For contest ' Summers end ' By Kelly Deschler Ranked 5th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/17/2014 5:17:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/17/2014 7:55:00 AM
Autumn is so graceful Dr. Sharma. Beautifully written winning poem. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/17/2014 5:23:00 AM
Hah, the summer has ended, Dr. Upma. A great relief, congrats on the win
Login to Reply
Date: 9/17/2014 4:06:00 AM
- A lovely imagery in your poem .... bye beautiful summer - Congrats with your win Dr. Upma ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2014 9:24:00 PM
I will not be missing those humid summer nights, either!.... This charming poem was very nicely rhymed. Great work, Dr. Upma! Congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2014 1:13:00 PM
I love fall... and your poem. Love and prayers, Gina
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2014 10:57:00 AM
Dear Dr. Upma, how well you describe both the pleasure and the heat of summer. We don't really have much "fall" weather here. It was a 100 degrees yesterday. I wish I could take a walk with you to see the "yellow and orange" replace the greenery. Best wishes in the contest! I know how busy work keeps you, so thank you for sending a poem to Karen. She said, "It is wonderful!" Of course it is. You wrote it. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
A. Sharma Avatar
Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/31/2014 11:05:00 AM
I should rather be thankful to you for guiding me all through my course into poetry,, you really r so very kind !
A. Sharma Avatar
Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/31/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thnx a lot my dear friend Carolyn! Has been wonderful meeting u at soup n ur inspiration has taken me far to Karen! Feels good meeting yet another intellectual,, world would be so heavenly never had thought so,,
Date: 8/31/2014 6:58:00 AM
Stunning rhyme with lovely imagery Dr Sharma. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
A. Sharma Avatar
Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/31/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thnx for ur lovely visit Jan!
Date: 8/31/2014 6:31:00 AM
:) Way to go, Dr Upma...Beautifully written. Sweet and tender. Hugs
Login to Reply
A. Sharma Avatar
Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/31/2014 11:07:00 AM
Thank you dear Eileen! Do glad u liked it !

Book: Reflection on the Important Things