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Adieu

Leaves still clinging golden and true after the first Autumn snowfall. Boughs waving windy good byes to the last of the yarrows white pall. Fallow fields of rye long gone by who also wave heartfelt adieu as the wild geese cry flying by so neatly arranged in their queues.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/8/2011 10:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Debbie. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your win in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:29:00 PM
you knock me off my after summer feet, lights! … cheery KUDOS to you for the special win :) huggs
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Date: 6/29/2011 3:56:00 PM
oh I hope not yet. We're just crawling into summer. Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, joyce
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:23:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on another super win with this loveliest of poetry ..oh .. wow..oh.. enjoy..
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Date: 6/22/2010 10:22:00 AM
Still a favorite poem Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2009 11:51:00 PM
A great cob-web of imagination ... Deby, at it again! Cheers! Canny.
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Date: 10/22/2009 5:15:00 PM
Yes summer is about to say good-by. I use to run up to Beardstown Illinios quite often this time of the year. And the maple tree leaves around the corn fields were amazing in their many shades of colors. Arkansas has had a lot of rain this fall, and that makes for a beautiful forest of many colors, in the Ozark mountains. Where I live. Thanks for your comment today, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:06:00 PM
very well painted- love and peace:james
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Date: 10/21/2009 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Excellent job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:45:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL. Yes I am shouting Deborah I love it. Goes to my favs. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 5:59:00 PM
Breathtaking and beautiful!! What a wonderful picture you've painted with words!! ~ Perhaps around that beautiful home of yours??
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Date: 10/20/2009 4:23:00 PM
reminds me of Carl Sandburg.... artfully crafted, Deb... jim
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Date: 10/20/2009 3:16:00 PM
Nicely done fall write. Keep writing. Sara
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