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Adieu

Let a sky of clouds Drenched in mustard shafts of light caress The stars feasting the crispness of the night Let the sheer twilight be my fortress Let solitude be my guide It is the monsoon wind, perhaps, that sends me your breath Which subsequently sneaks me off From the pavement of certainty Only to catch a whiff of your skin Or even a glint of your magnificence(worthy of sonnets) Whose beauty transcends my reality It is the midnight chirp of the beetles elsewhere That soothes me to sleep Each note is a syllable of sound free falling Whose music seeks no violin, Whose tune hums nothing but the rich surrealism Of your psalm-sculpted anatomy: May it be your sigh exhaled against your fingertips And of your eyes sensual as the sidewalks of your lips May it be your breast nestling on your chest And of your walk coupled with the off-rhymed stillness of your talk/ Let it be the goosebumps burst with moonshines teeming with hyacinths As I hang transfixed from the extinction of your scent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/15/2008 1:10:00 PM
The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/12/2008 10:04:00 PM
Magaling, magaling, magaling! :) Congratulations Gino for making it to the list of winners of Mr. John's contest. Looking forward to your another great write. Regards, Teri
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Date: 10/12/2008 6:11:00 PM
Holy moly, this poem just totally blew my mind - there are no words to describe this poems awesomeness. Wow, amazing expression, word choice and truth of each line, love this poem. Yeah! Love Kristin
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Date: 10/12/2008 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention in johns poetry contest - loved this poem - God Bless
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Date: 10/12/2008 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations Gino on your Honorable Mention in John's contest! Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/11/2008 2:35:00 AM
Hi Gino! Your poems as I have read all of it made a deep impression and became an inspiration for me. All of the works are masterpieces of a well appreciated person who truly has a poetic heart! :)-nadine-
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