Addict

Addiction is your problem, I say to you, Never take that toll, I see you, Popping them now and then, Addiction is the problem, Take your coarse, Fight this drug, Get rid of this addiction, Please for me, Fight your addiction, I have faith, I have given you all the hope, My little body holds, Fight, Fight, Fight, Save yourself from, This addiction!!!

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Jay Smith

Date: 3/26/2010 9:37:00 AM

It's amazing how compassionate you are... It's sweet too, best of luck to your friend.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2010 10:38:00 PM

girl you got the right words for a poet. Just don't let that poem face you. Unless that face of addiction is happiness.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2010 10:24:00 AM

Can you help me I am addicted to Poetry Soup.....Ha Ha but one could be...Great write..Sara

Joanna Smith

Date: 3/9/2010 9:28:00 AM

THIS IS A VERY POWERFUL PIECE HERE EMILY AND I HOPE IT WILL TRUELY TOUCH SOMEONE IT IS HARD TO OVERCOME ADDICTION BUT NOT IMPOSSIBLE,SO KEEP GIVING PEOPLE HOPE, =) YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON WITH A BEAUTIFUL HEART. (SRRY BOUT CAPS IT'S A WORK THING)

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/8/2010 9:22:00 AM

This is amazing...it brought tears to my stinging eyes...i have problems with addictions, and this is, an empowering poem, to help take you away from them, and give you the strength to walk away from them.