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Adam

she smiles and gives the thumbs-up sign, bites off a small piece, gives me mine, oh, sweetest fruit ever tasted of the tree one never planted !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:47:00 PM
Romeo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line about ADAM. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 1/16/2016 3:46:00 PM
I like the missing imagery..................SKAT
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/29/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT.
Date: 9/6/2011 7:37:00 AM
An interesting way to tell that part of the story, enjoyed.
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