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Adam is very caring and… 
Devoted son, brother, uncle and friend 
And is a very nice and decent, hard-working 
Man, the kindest person that you can meet 

Inside he's sweet and child-like. 
Sensitive, gentle and most caring 

And he loves to help anyone that he can. 

Vivacious and full of fun 
Energy and zest for Jesus his Lord and his savior. 
Ready to help others 
Young at heart! 

Nifty, reliable, and dependable 
Independent, and compassionate 
Caring, kind-hearted and funny 
Endlessly challenging to do his best 

Yogurt and ice cream lover 
Outstandingly easy-going personality 
UFO aficionado 
Notoriously creative 
Great company to be with! 

Mature,silly,just a big kid that 
Aspires to be the best artist that he can be, and to me, is the... 
Nicest son in the whole wide world! 

Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 


August 22,2009 

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  1. Date: 10/12/2009 3:22:00 AM
    You do love your son. Every single line is a tribute. Well written, Dorian. Keep writing,Gert

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 7:56:00 AM
    Nice tribute Dorian difficult form to master well.Well done.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 5:21:00 AM
    Nicely done tribute to your son. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 7:44:00 PM
    How lucky you are to have inspiration from someone as amazing as Adam, Dorian. And he is equally lucky to receive such a lovely tribute! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 6:25:00 PM
    Love to see poems like this, a nice dedication to God's son in a son, your son. Your son's dedication in tribute is marvelous. Sincerely, Moses