Adam

Who am I but a prototype of my Creator He breathed His life into my being Listen to the breath in my voice It will tell you who I am a finished product of my Creator

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/14/2023 6:38:00 PM

We are the prototype and the finished product of our Creator. Powerful words my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2023 6:40:00 PM

Jerry, thank you for letting me know how this poem impacted you. ~ Descendant of Adam

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/13/2023 9:16:00 PM

Wise words, gw. Now all that remains is to find out the true essence of our being, obviously resident within.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2023 6:44:00 PM

Ego, ergo nihilo!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/13/2023 8:09:00 PM

But chose not to be perfect like his creator. Like all of us that followed.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2023 8:16:00 PM

Well, he was given the choice... And so are we ...